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  • 5 years ago

    by Sunshine

    MAA..this must be one of the freshest I've read so far. I have been moved by poems and I have had my thoughts provoked with deep poems, but this, this is is fresh air. I enjoyed reading every single line, why did ANDREA nominate it a33. I love it. I love every word, it's so perfect. The structuring, the flow, the punctuation, the word choice.

    The title, the opening line and the closing verse; it's a perfect poem. Added to my favourites.

    • 5 years ago

      by Poet on the Piano

      Oh, Rania, thank you! I did edit and may go back and re-think parts of the third stanza as initially, I only wrote the first two parts and had intended to keep it more concise. I wrote a bit more at home and mulled over a few lines to see if they really added anything or not.

      Lots of <3 to you

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Your writes have a way to Express the unexpressable scenes and attach it to the surrounding around you as well as to your feelings and thoughts which makes your write unique! Well written and Congrats on the win!

  • 5 years ago

    by Tanya Southey

    I adore this poem. So beautiful x