by Mark Jul 16, 2019
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Shall I reveal how oft my thoughts are yours? |
by Everlasting
Yeah, this is so dreamy. It makes me feel a warm feeling every time I read it. I can’t pick a favorite line but if I have to these lines are the ones I remember |
I didn't feel that the last two lines were forced. .. I felt it was an emotional finale to a superb piece. Milly x |
by Everlasting
I really love this piece. Though I’m still debating whether the last line sounds force or not. Sometimes when I read it, I get the impression that it was just written to go with the rhyme other times I don’t know. However, this piece is dreamy. Thank you so much for sharing it. |