I really love this piece. Though I’m still debating whether the last line sounds force or not. Sometimes when I read it, I get the impression that it was just written to go with the rhyme other times I don’t know. However, this piece is dreamy. Thank you so much for sharing it.

I didn't feel that the last two lines were forced. .. I felt it was an emotional finale to a superb piece. Milly x

Yeah, this is so dreamy. It makes me feel a warm feeling every time I read it. I can’t pick a favorite line but if I have to these lines are the ones I remember

“I wonder you: no more than waves can bring
No less than all the shells who whisper love,
But even more than petals of the Spring!”

Specially the last one,” but even more than petals of spring!”