by Ben Pickard
And why would you put sunglasses on which only blunt all those wonderful visuals you clearly notice? Not sure if that's what you were getting at with the last line, but that's how I received it! |
by Star
Yes that’s what I meant, and this is a double meaning poem :) |
by Everlasting
I do t know if your aim was for us readers to visualize how you were seeing when wearing sunglasses? |
by Star
What I meant is that I don't like sunglasses that cover all the beautiful colors. |
by D.
This is quite clever, STAR. There’s something childlike about the ‘I like’ repetition that I’m not sure about yet, but it feels like you started writing it with a different end product in mind but decided to improvise. |