Comments : Memories of you

  • 5 years ago

    by Alex Yew

    'Leaving me tattered and torn incapable of discerning the right from the wrong,' this line captured my attention. I bet most of us might have somehow experienced it before. Also, i felt your sorrow.

  • 5 years ago

    by Everlasting

    “You showed no emotion as you disappeared into the mist, ”

    I like the imagery in some of these lines. For instance the above sentence. I am with With Alex, I felt your sorrow. Thank you for sharing.

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A heart wrenching piece steeped in emotion. Milly x