Life

A powerful plea to life! Let me live, let me feel the highs and lows. I feel like the "peace" you speak of is when we don't know what life has in store for us, when we can't plan or see or hear the intensity. There's just quiet, a quiet we can't understand. The formatting was neat in this, I just didn't think it needed all the punctuation like the semi colon in the second line or commas after "cause" "me", etc. It would have been just as meaningful without the extra punctuation in my opinion.