Comments : Dancing in the Dark

  • 5 years ago

    by prasanna

    I think we can all relate to 'what-if's about our lives. Well-penned poem, the rhyme scheme was nice and the narration was nice. Hope to see more poems from you!

    Welcome to P&Q!

    • 5 years ago

      by Liv

      Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment, Hiraeth!
      I appreciate it and thanks for the feedback :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Liv, I'm guessing this isn't your first poem? I think this is stunning. So thought provoking, so stoic - something about it really resonates with me ... that feeding the demons.
    An excellent introduction of yourself to the site!
    Well done and nominated :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 5 years ago

      by Liv

      Thank you Kitty Cat Lady!

      I use to write poetry a long time ago and I wrote this one last summer.
      So it's been a while, but I think there will be more to come! Thank you for the positive feedback - it's very encouraging and appreciated!