I like how you described depression as being greedy, and how you connected it with the hour-glass effect. It works really well. The form fits your poem and word choice so perfectly. I really love this :)

There’s lots of clever wording here. Not an easy form to write well. The title is witty, as is describing depression as greedy.

“Illusion...perhaps...Delusion”

Distracts and halts the poem a little. I think words like ‘perhaps’ and ‘maybe’ remove a lot of surety from a poem, and don’t often work.

That’s just one line though! An apt choice of form, and enjoyable read.

Hello Hellon,
Out of the greed and into the nothing in a splendid poetic portrayal of reality bitten. How you end and begin with, 'empty' is perfect. Very well done indeed.

Regards, Tony.