Simply beautiful as well as meaningful!!!
Liked the sentiments and the images you guys
have penned here..really lovely!

Thank you for writing this with me and for rescuing the poem :)

Why am I not prepared for this collabs, AGAIN, this is something I never saw coming (like Daniel and Noura's).

Tenderness, wonder and awe, mixed with some stardust and "star stuff" here. A love and light that knows no bounds.

You two are magic. Point. Blank. Period.

Your writing works well together! Due to vocabulary choice, there are moments I can put my finger on who wrote it but that is not a problem at all! It’s certainly a romantic poem, one that flows effortlessly from image to image. I particularly enjoyed the third and fifth stanza as even though this poem is heavy with ‘starry’ imagery, it’s best when it sounds vulnerable and honest.

‘the opulent warmth in your heart
is more valuable than any metal
I’ve known.’

is a little overworded. Opulent stands out as a little verbose? I’ve no problem wiry verbosity but here, it’s too...loud? A mouthful. Stands out too much. I also appreciate the change in lyrical matter to these small refrains but I found this part too disquieting.

Liked it a lot overall, though. Well done both :)