Comments : Relax

  • 5 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This is very sensual :)

    • 5 years ago

      by Walter

      Thank you Em and for your nomination :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Skyfire

    Overall very emotive. The second stanza jars a bit for me, but the rest flow beautifully.

    • 5 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks Skyfire for reading and your comments.