Where Has it Gone?

by Everlasting   Aug 28, 2019


Where has my imagination gone?

It used to be like bees
buzzing buzzing in my ears
flying afore my sight
as if soaring from flower to flower
germinating my thoughts
to make honey

Sweet honey!

to add sweetness to my life.

    report violation
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  • 5 years ago

    by Star

    I know what you mean by that Luce. I have felt the same for too long.
    You’re just not feeling it. maybe your brain is occupied now and when the occupation falls a little, tiny ants of imagination will march into your brain.
    (I hope your head wont feel itchy then :P)

    • 5 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Hehe you’re probably correct. Thank you Star and and Mark

  • 5 years ago

    by prasanna

    I don't think your imagination went anywhere Luce, this poem is ripe with your patented imagination :) I could hear the bees buzzing in my ears, and flying from flower to flower. One note I do have about the poem is to maybe add parentheses around 'Sweet honey!' just to make it a bit easier to write.

    Really love your latest influx of poems, if those arose from 'a lack of imagination' as you so put it, then sign me up!

  • 5 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    It's still sweet, luce, and will always be

    • 5 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you Ben and Ya—-Naa.
      Despite so, it still feels like it’s missing.

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Luce - your imagination is here, bold and clear on this very page.

    All the best as ever,

    Ben

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