Comments : Where Has it Gone?

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Luce - your imagination is here, bold and clear on this very page.

    All the best as ever,

    Ben

  • 5 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    It's still sweet, luce, and will always be

    • 5 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you Ben and Ya—-Naa.
      Despite so, it still feels like it’s missing.

  • 5 years ago

    by prasanna

    I don't think your imagination went anywhere Luce, this poem is ripe with your patented imagination :) I could hear the bees buzzing in my ears, and flying from flower to flower. One note I do have about the poem is to maybe add parentheses around 'Sweet honey!' just to make it a bit easier to write.

    Really love your latest influx of poems, if those arose from 'a lack of imagination' as you so put it, then sign me up!

  • 5 years ago

    by Star

    I know what you mean by that Luce. I have felt the same for too long.
    You’re just not feeling it. maybe your brain is occupied now and when the occupation falls a little, tiny ants of imagination will march into your brain.
    (I hope your head wont feel itchy then :P)

    • 5 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Hehe you’re probably correct. Thank you Star and and Mark