by Ben Pickard
Luce - your imagination is here, bold and clear on this very page. |
by Ya----Na
It's still sweet, luce, and will always be |
by Everlasting
Thank you Ben and Ya—-Naa. |
by prasanna
I don't think your imagination went anywhere Luce, this poem is ripe with your patented imagination :) I could hear the bees buzzing in my ears, and flying from flower to flower. One note I do have about the poem is to maybe add parentheses around 'Sweet honey!' just to make it a bit easier to write. |
by Star
I know what you mean by that Luce. I have felt the same for too long. |
by Everlasting
Hehe you’re probably correct. Thank you Star and and Mark |