Comments : Handwriting Frustration

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Star, this poem is almost a contradiction of its subject, simply because you set a course with this piece and arrived punctually at your destination! Sails flying proudly in the wind, too! Excuse my poor attempts at metaphor, but I really did enjoy this one.

    But moving along the page the
    words keep snapping,

    ^^

    Love this.

    Take care

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you Ben, I honestly think this poem is weak. :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Absolutely love this.

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you ^_^

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    STAR, well done, this is a great piece from you, love the last verse :) M

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      That you Michael :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Tanya Southey

    I do this too! Great poem!

    • 5 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you :)