Comments : Spring

  • 5 years ago

    by Star

    I love how the alliteration starts off the poem smoothly, and also the repetition “before the leaves appear.”
    There is always something in your poetry that is really warm. Love this!! :)

  • This is so stunning, I love this time just before spring dances in, that sense of hopelessness slowly melts away and you certainly captured that. Beautiful imagery

    • 5 years ago

      by Tanya Southey

      Thank you Hazel, spring is the best. All that hope.