Comments : Foetus

  • 4 years ago

    by Gracy Judith

    Omg this is such a beautiful and strong piece. Very touching since its written from the perspective of a child in its mother's womb. The below line is simple yet when you consider the whole poem in its entirety...this line conveys so much.

    I think I know more about you
    than anyone else

    I also love the below lines...beautifully penned. And the last two verses of the poem...simple awesome!

    And the sighs
    you try to hide like guilty treasures,
    weathered
    by the sound of your heart

    Looking forward to reading some more of your poems :-)

  • 4 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    What a write! It has moved me and touched all the corners of motherhood. There are some memorable and heartfelt lines in this poem and it just made me read it again and again...lovely write!