by Ben Pickard
I really do like this and the opening three lines are sublime, in my opinion. |
by Risqué
Thanks Ben, will do. |
by Brenda
No matter how hard you try, you cant make another person whole. People like that will drain you dry and leave you destroyed. Totally relatable piece, so many of us have been there. Stay strong, you are so much more than what this person made you feel like. |
by CRAFTY KEN
Nice work Risque', great beginning; I have given up so much time. |