Comments : Second Chance (Senryu)

  • 5 years ago

    by Everlasting

    hmmm... what can i say? This piece leaves room for imagination. Let’s say the house is a person and the open door is the heart of the person per se. So letting the heart open to love someone can be an invite to be with someone that has no feeling for anyone...

    It’s sad. In other words, A first relationship didn’t work out but the individual is open to try a newer relationship and give himself a second chance at love. However, it’s not fair for whomever will get in a relationship with him because him might be using that someone as a rebound.

    There’s many ways to interpret the senyru. The above (hopefully it makes sense) it’s what came to mind at first read. Thanks for sharing.

    • 5 years ago

      by Walter

      Hi Luce, Thanks for your comment and I love your interpretation. I think this is why I like the Senryu style as it can say or mean so much with just only a few words. As you say, there are many ways to interpret and so can hold different meanings depending on the reader.

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Clever write, Walter.

    All the best as ever

    • 5 years ago

      by Walter

      Thank you Ben for your comment :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    Nicely put Walter! That is the neat thing about Senryu's, that punch at the end. Well done!

    • 5 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks very much for reading and your comment Brenda :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    A very bold statement was expressed here, yet you left some room for the imagination. Thoroughly enjoyed!!

    • 4 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks so much for you comments Acoustic!