Comments : Funny

  • 5 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I adore how you formatted this, and the impact of each line, especially the ending lines... like a punch to the gut for the reader. Again, you say so much in so many ways, and just everything works about this poem. I can't find other words!

  • 5 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Life is too short for
    bad jokes,
    too short to be
    right all the time,

    ^ those are my favorite lines. I agree.

    • 5 years ago

      by D.

      Thank you both :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    Nominated Daniel-Im not sure what your words stirred in me, this was such a fascinating piece.

  • 5 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Woah.