by Maple Tree
ohhhh this hits the heart. The poem says it all and places the reader into the thoughts, feelings and the moment of realizing what is happened. Beautiful and heartbreaking. powerful write |
by Ben Pickard
A really moving piece. Nominated. |
This is my exact situation right now so I'm totally relating to this. Well said! :-) x |
by D.
I loved the simplicity of this. The last line should sound overly sweet and sentimental but it doesn’t. Well done :) |
The simplicity, yet the meaning and understanding of your two souls existing, focusing on that is a wonderful thing. That you cannot always foreshadow or predict what is up ahead, there is no manual on how to love. You just do. You just move forward, together. |
by Koan
Yup! Thats about it... |
by Em (marmite)
That's some pretty deep stuff and extremely relatable.. |