by Nat Quillan Dec 3, 2019
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Hello Clementine, |
Written with a delicate tone, a tenderness despite the heavy sadness. Also, the name "Clementine" is beautiful and has a sort of innocence to it. I like that you included a name, making it more personal and the "Mrs Mulligan" as well, it made everything more haunting. |
by Brenda
Nicely done, welcome to P&Q! Looking forward to reading more- |
by prasanna
A harrowing write, welcome to P&Q! Hope to see more from you! |
by Nat Quillan
This was a quick attempt at a first poem on this site, so enjoy. |