This was a quick attempt at a first poem on this site, so enjoy.

A harrowing write, welcome to P&Q! Hope to see more from you!

Nicely done, welcome to P&Q! Looking forward to reading more-

Written with a delicate tone, a tenderness despite the heavy sadness. Also, the name "Clementine" is beautiful and has a sort of innocence to it. I like that you included a name, making it more personal and the "Mrs Mulligan" as well, it made everything more haunting.

Oh and welcome to PnQ! Can't wait to read what you share on here!