This is absolutely wonderful and I'm glad it's been nominated:-) x
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This sweeping prose is full vivid imagery and personification" from shivering puddles to groaning thunder clouds. Wonderful word usage. Congrats on the nomination...well deserved

Judging Comment:

I love how Obscure is showing off her talent. The poem has beautiful soft rhythm and rhyme. I like how she described the process of which rain starts lightly, and at the end is pouring. I also like the images through out the poem; like the shivering puddles and the soaked linen.