Umbrellas are not helpful
When you're underneath the sea

^^

Love these lines. The rhyming throughout, in fact, is superb.

What I felt after reading this is insecurity. I am not sure why, but this reminded me of myself when I was younger.
So well written :)

Wowzers. The depth in this is striking. All too clearly, I can imagine and FEEL the weight of being soaked even when shielded, the hope to not sink yet have everything pull you down anyway. Powerful write.

I really like this poem, I've been trying to comment on it but I couldn't find the words. This painted a really vivid image in my head, and I tried my best to paint the image that was in my head, i'm not at all the best artist but this is my attempt: https://i.imgur.com/jdjbGNl.png

I'm a bit sad this poem wasn't nominated however :(

Adding this to my favourites!