by ADEL Dec 16, 2019
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
There are tombs with gloom traces |
by Star
Judging Comment: |
by Everlasting
I enjoyed reading this. Though to be complete honest, I need a couple of reads to have a glimpse of what the poem is about. I couldn’t help but get distracted with the smoothness and the rhymes this piece has. Nonetheless, that’s totally on me. Thank you for sharing. |
by ADEL
First I appreciate your comment, second in my opinion, poem is a life, and the much we experience life the more we comprehend it. We as poets express our hidden dimension which is yet to live and experience, so the impact of reading any poem is different everytime. It's my pleasure you reread my poem. Wish you the best |
by ddavidd
Here a little gift for you, if you haven't heard them yet. |
by ADEL
Dear Aria, you and I nearly have the same taste of the joy of bitterness sculpted in words. I fully enjoyed it, hope you're living what you deserve. |
by ddavidd
Nice to see you back Adel. |