by D. Dec 16, 2019
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Did you love this city’s winter murk? |
by Ben Pickard
It's your use of half rhyme that makes this excellent, Daniel. It means nothing sounds forced and all is subtle! |
by D.
Thank you Ben, MaryAnne! Always means a lot coming from you guys :) |
I liked the rhymes, as that's not something I see often in your poetry, and the way these lines were phrased as questions... there's such an easy flow, a yearning to reminisce and re-discover this person as you learn and walk around and within the city. |
by ddavidd
Now after this Liverpool mesmerizingly seems pulling |
by Michael
A nice tribute to your city Daniel and well written of course, M :) |
by D.
Thanks Michael, David. It’s a wonderful city :) |