I've always loved your use of imagery, it's always been vivid and fresh, and this is no exception. :)

Great imagery EL. Especially how you use ways of describing how you feel. Nicely penned, M :)

A very relatable poem for anyone who has experienced that struggle in long term illness. Beautiful and imaganitive imagery that paints a vivid picture. Milly x

Very unique, verry you. I believe you have found YOU in your poetry. It makes me a little proud for personal reasons and also for the reason that we share the same site together.