Good Night (Senryu)

by Star Dec 18, 2019 category : Miscellaneous / Misc. poems

The night has rested
on her exhausted shoulder,
as she fell asleep.

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4 years ago
by Milly Hayward

So much feeling woven in so few words. What a pretty way to portray tiredness. I'm yawning already :) Milly x
- 4 years ago
  by Star
  
  ^__^ thank you!
4 years ago
by Ben Pickard

I found myself drifting as i read this...in a good way!
- 4 years ago
  by Star
  
  Thank you :)
4 years ago
by prasanna

Soft, serene, what's not to like!

https://i.imgur.com/3ha9Neu.png :)
- 4 years ago
  by Star
  
  Thank you David and Mark!!
  The drawing is good :)
4 years ago
by ddavidd

Wonderful! More than the scenery and the way you put it, even, I adore the motion of gradual nsense and mode in this.

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