Comments : There's a Penguin in my sandwich box

  • 4 years ago

    by Michael

    Haha,, Miss Milly, your poetic mind never fails to amaze me, all said in good rhyme too! Pesky Penguin! ;0, M x

    • 4 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thanks Michael it started off oh so innocent :) Milly x

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I will never look at penguins the same way again, Milly!

    • 4 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thanks Ben I love penguins but this one turned out much different than I thought he would. Milly x

  • 4 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Bahaha! And here, I thought you would write about how cute and adorable penguins are... it seems I never realized their more mischievous side ;)

    Thoroughly enjoyed this and your creativity!

    • 4 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      MA really glad you enjoyed it :) and just when you thought it was safe..... :) Hope you have a great Christmas xx

  • 4 years ago

    by stormingdance (Lessa)

    This makes me think of the Wallace and Gromit episode of a pesky penguin who looked all innocent but was actually a thief. (My son watches it on repeat.)

    Lovely poem, made me laugh. Thanks for sharing! x

    • 4 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thanks Jessica. Glad it made you smile. Milly x

  • 4 years ago

    by Brenda

    What a fun write Milly! I do adore your imagination! Hugs you-

    • 4 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thankyou Brenda. Hope you have a lovely Christmas time. Milly x

  • 4 years ago

    by Koan

    ~sniles~
    Thanks for the laugh! Your poem is awesome...

    • 4 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thanks Joan. Glad you liked it :) I'm trying to write more funny ones so really appreciate your feedback Milly x

  • 4 years ago

    by Tony Grannell

    Hello Milly,
    Humour on Earth, presented by Milly Attenborough as she takes us on a series of unnatural events in a lunchbox.
    Comedy at its poetic best. Excellent!
    Kind regards, Tony.

  • 4 years ago

    by Lost star

    I was hooked by "Theres a penquin in my sandwich box" one of the greatest opening lines to a poem ever! genuinely made me laugh out loud!