I want to not
by Sara Dec 31, 2019
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I want to not get upset n over think stuff I want to be able to process better then I do why does it effect me so bad is it cause I'm afraid of what I might lose or might get told I'm not good enough I wish I knew why I'm feeling this way I just want to be loved n cared about but I'm afraid I'll push people away |
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4 years ago
Don't we all hope and wish to process things better than we do? It's so hard when we feel powerless to the pain that reaches us, when we can't help but be affected, but have that fear. My suggestion is to format this into stanzas or if you do keep it in more of a prose-like, thought process, then to add punctuation and proper grammar and perhaps a little more to give depth, or details at least.
