Comments : Paradox.

  • 4 years ago

    by Tanya Southey

    Such strength and sadness.

    Love this line -

    Though I am often
    a stranger
    with a similar name

    Well done

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Personally, I don't believe any of us are without 'rotten' parts, but some are just more sensitive to them and thus, have to acknowledge them. But surviving the act of acknowledging them makes you stronger than most, MA. Those who are tough, perhaps, never suffer depression. But those who are truly strong suffer it and survive it anyway.
    Happy new year and all the best as ever,

    Ben

    • 4 years ago

      by Poet on the Piano

      So well said, Ben. Thank you, sincerely. Happy New Year to you as well!

  • 4 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    An emotional write that depicts well of the internal battle felt by many. Some ingenious insightful descriptive prose that will resonate with anyone who has faced similar demons. Milly x

  • 4 years ago

    by Star

    Judging Comment:

    The first time I read this, i found myself crying, and I’m not the type who cries easily. I connected with the poem, and it was like I have submitted to myself.
    MA was addressing someone as “you”, and for me personally it wasn’t a person she was addressing. Because when I read it with my voice, it was life.
    Genuinely, thank you for sharing!!