by Maher Jan 4, 2020
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
There was a time when the sky was blue, |
by Em (marmite)
This actually breaks my heart... |
by Maher
Apologies Em :( |
by Saerelune
Such a detailed and strong poem. It strikes a perfect balance between factual documentation and an emotional outcry, full of pain and frustration. Really appreciated the rhythm to keep the narrative engaging next to the realistic imagery. |
by Maher
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. |
by Maple Tree
Dear Maher, |
by Maher
Thank you Andrea, very much appreciated. |
Maher, as always, your narration is incredibly clear and brimming with emotion. I cannot imagine the devastation, just as I cannot imagine the outrage at the prime minister and the decision to refuse funds to these heroes. |
by Maher
Thank you, I'm glad some of the emotion came through. Thankfully I'm in a safer area compared to others, but there's still a very real threat to Sydney if the heatwaves & winds keep up. It certainly is scary, but much more so for the towns in this poem who have been decimated and evacuated further South from here. |
by Everlasting
I’m not fascinated with the title but the entire poem is epic. My favorite from yours. |
by Maher
Thanks, glad you like it. Open to suggestions for the title before the fires reach here :) |