Comments : Misled

  • 4 years ago

    by Kate

    I’m really impressed with the rhyming in this poem and I love how each section is broken apart to reflect a different chapter in the relationship.

    I think you’ve beautifully captured how easy it is to find yourself enamored of someone. And how truly heartbreaking it is when it isn’t reciprocated.

    Beautiful write.

    • 4 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks so much for reading and your lovely comment Kate. And yes, I couldn't agree more, it is truly heartbreaking when love is one-sided.

    • 4 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks so much for reading and your lovely comment Kate. And yes, I couldn't agree more, it is truly heartbreaking when love is one-sided.