Faltered Breaths
by Lioness Jan 9, 2020
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You force whispered breaths against my name, and at that point I knew your love for me had faltered, leaving my soul as empty as your promised words. |
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4 years ago
I did a double take when I saw a new piece by you! Missed you and your poetry. This is heart-wrenching, even in such few lines. Feeling love and affection, knowing it is forced, nothing can shield you from that sadness.
Sending all the love <3-
4 years ago
by Lioness
Awww Thanks so much!!! Yeah it's amazing to be back and can't wait to write and read more!
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4 years ago
by prasanna
Glad to see you posting again, as heartbreaking as this poem is.
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4 years ago
by Lioness
Awww thank you that means a lot. Yeah! Great to be back!
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4 years ago
by Star
A short heartbreaking poem. I really like the title, it sets the mood for the poem really well :)
It is so good to see an old member posting again!!!-
4 years ago
by Lioness
Awww actually really excited to post again lol I've been writing stories in the meantime lol Love this site. Thank you so much.
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