The but in the last line turned the poem in such way that I felt the conclusion was not earned.
But good afford all together in my eyes.

This had my full attention from the start, especially that second stanza. And I agree with what David said. The ending just didn't quite work for me and left me a little confused. Very good effort though<3

Yeah I agree with the others...
Your closing needs a little tweak..
I love the read..

Well done, Star. Fully deserved.

Oops! When I read the title, haha I thought you were referring to my false alarm poem. Phew! Glad it wasn’t.

As I was reading, I felt like I wanted more and then the ending felt rushed.

I'll deviate from the rest of the comments to say that I enjoyed the ending; I'm not sure if it was intentional but since it was so abrupt, it didn't match the poem much like how "the plot/did not match the weather". Poetic & ironic. :)

That being said I enjoyed this and I really love the second last stanza, it paints an interesting image.