Comments : Food For Thought

  • 4 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    I like this fast pace of this, it got my heart racing and made me want to keep reading, the ending was not what I expected thougj as it seemed to end so suddenly. Great write

    • 4 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks Em and yes I deliberately ended it so suddenly to leave the rest up to the reader...as the title suggests!

  • 4 years ago

    by Koan

    WoW cleaver poem! I love your rhymes and the tempo of this great poem!

    • 4 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks for your comment Koan :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Everlasting

    I was expecting something that would make me think rather something philosophical when I read the title. But it was a nice read. The poem kept me engaged. I liked the tempo. I’m not a big fan of the ending though.

    • 4 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks Everlasting and yes I have to admit the poem basically wrote itself except for the ending...I wasn't too sure which way to go with it.