Comments : Silhouette promise

  • 4 years ago

    by Koan


    Police arrest innocents
    Terrorists kill innocents
    Government blame innocents

    Wouldn't be amazing if you would end every line with "innocents" !!!
    And the next stanza and so on would have a repeat as well..
    I really liked those 3 lines, the way they flowed
    Anyway, thx for the read.