My only suggestions would be to separate the line where you reply or use quotes for the dialogue, and also a line break once you start describing the birds.
Also the last line "some say escapees from botanical gardens add a creepy aura at night" was such a unique line, separate that from the rest so it's on its own line, and doesn't read like a run-on?
Thank you for the constructive comments Poet On
The Piano.I have edited the poem and added a new
word to explain what the Fruit Bats were escaping from,
Vince.