Wow.. truly just wow. that last half was wow. I can in vision this poem and can relate. But hopefully something for you will eclipse that moon but for the better.

Absolutely stunning. I love this - just simply that. I love this.

This is amazing Kate! Love this too and added to my favorites.

Loved the personification of the moon.
The only memory left of you
Just a simple reflection - such a poignant and sorrowful ending. Well done

Hope

Beautiful <3

I can't do much more than sigh after reading this piece! In two stanzas, you say so much. There's heartache and loss and a metaphor that holds such sorrow of this lost love.

Love your writes so much.

Bravo!!

And Sokka’s heart was broken.

I love this soooooo much.

Beautifully penned!! I'm becoming quite the fan! Great word choice and clarity to this write, really well crafted:)