by nouriguess Jan 30, 2020
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
We're in the dim-lighted room |
by mistake
Very vivid imagery for me and I enjoyed the pace at which you let it roll. The last stanza really stood out for me and created a small love in my heart for this poem. |
Noura, the details and specific things you mention always make your writes that more intimate.... and full of meaning. I love how even in the reality that the city's voice will soon be silent and will soon leave you, that there is still a purpose in the darkness. Even if the city isolates others, you have each other. Even if everything else is depleting, you won't be <3 |
by silver cloud
wish you have a life worth living |