I Just Realized it Today

This is super clever and such deep meaning behind it. Absolutely great! Just a wonderfully intriguing poem.

Hi. *offers a polite wave*

I like the uniqueness of your poems and this is no exception. A vessel that can carry things in. Not a box, rather a cage, trapping most, but not all. Those bits that fall through the holes are interesting. Did they escape or were they freed?

The line "I carry everything that I can possibly can" is curious to me. It may be a typo, but knowing you, it could also be meant?
Either way, it's always nice to read you.

We live near a supermarket. We also live near a creek. It's a constant frustration that some people think its okay to push ones trolley into the creek, which is a haven for wildlife. I see too many of them discarded this way. Maybe that's how they will end up, upside down in a muddy creek? Lol

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Love the imagery you create here! Had me coming back to read this. Well done!

Luce, loved this! Wow! I'm just absorbing this. You are much more than this grocery cart you compare yourself to.

No you’re not >_< there nothing wrong with being see through.
What a metaphor Luce, captured the feeling very well!!