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by Cantchangeme Feb 21, 2020 category : Life, society / about society
Laid here is so strange A place without a door Pin cushions and pornography Who could ask for more Certainly not you Reading fluorescent signs Through your bleeding sores Rape scenes and sodomy Who could ask for more Certainly not me Breathing feels so stressful Fools gold turns to rust Killing sprees and geometry Now who are you to trust Certainly not you Sounds of all the strays Angels fear their lust Fellatio and lobotomy Now who are you to trust Certainly not me
by Tony Grannell
Hello cantchangeme, This is a truly excellent piece of poetry, especially so: 'Killing sprees and geometry'. You have a wonderfully keen insight into the art of poetry as expressed here, in four splendid stanzas. A gem! Kind regards, Tony.