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  • 4 years ago

    by Brenda

    Wow! Powerful write Anne, nominated!

  • 4 years ago

    by Tony Grannell

    Hello Anne,
    Oh! The last stanza kicked me in the stomach. The death of a 'genuine heart' in the morning light. Such a sorrowful ending befitting this most sensitive yet brutally honest poem. Excellent!
    Regards, Tony.