The repetition of this worked well, and the phrasing of "I'm gunnin for you". The flow along with the kind of staccato images and statements really made it blunt that this is the end for this person, there's not just vengeance but a purpose behind this. It's not a lot of stanzas or imagery per say, but still a chilling write.

A chilling warning of revenge raises thoughts of a strong person pushed to their limits Milly x