This is a very vulnerable piece and I’m happy that you shared it. I won’t comment on learning to accept yourself the way that you are because that’s something that comes with time. The poem is filled with a sense of dread, upset, anger almost and confusion and you did such a wonderful job displaying that.

The rhyme was amazing, flow as well. But you’ve seemed to master that from what I’ve read so far. One thing to point out, “but I’m the one one trial” I believe should be “but I’m the one on trial”. Other than that, perfect and very emotional.

Well done.