very enchanting concept you poetically developed in this.
My only criticism would be: if all your future is the paper inside a fortune cookie, how com the fortune cookie itself become you in the next line?: " break mee..."
The connection is not prepared yet , if you say okay you meant you are a fortune cookie and your future is that paper. You only established the first part in your lines up to there.
This is a minor and my opinion could be wrong look at it with a grain of salt.

The political moment are so great and so many in this piece: " solid like a warrior, but riddled
with unsolved crimes against myself."

these lines are core of your tale in this piece: " I am a whitespace because I've smashed
my body into pieces, tracing each edge
to find the perfect storyline." -->> "My face is ..."

with the grand and and completely right conclusion : "I am a work of art
because I was once broken."

You have it in you dear Saerelune. Thanks for sharing your works