by BOB GALLO
If you were a story teller you would be the kind that let the details give the conclusion, not description. Hemingway was like this. |
by Ben Pickard
The idea of the pots quarreling and the fridge shuddering really is excellent. Those three lines generally are really very moving in these strange and surreal times. Nominated. |
by Sunshine
Very touching, speaks volumes to me at the moment. The new way is just so hard I've been there too! Your description is so accurate and detailed, it makes it just more and more emotional. </3 That closing line just broke my heart. |
Your voice in this is so surreal, heartbreaking and those last two lines bring even more depth in their emotion. <3 |
by nouriguess
Very touching. |