by prasanna Apr 2, 2020
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
the days patinas into night more readily |
by M. Rene'
It's nice to see that you are doing something for NaNoWriMo. I've always appreciated your works. Okay intro over - here's the comment: firstly I think it's cool you used the phrase proof - I've noticed that during this lockdown and chaos people are baking bread. So the timing made me laugh. Also, your intro for this piece was stunning. Especially "a temporary haven that stirs the soul |
by Sunshine
Lord <3 |