Comments : Contemporary (Senryu)

  • 4 years ago

    by prasanna

    I like this, something different from you!

    • 4 years ago

      by Star

      Thaankksss :) I am trying new things!!

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    How clever. Making up that all important syllable count with one word per line is wonderful.

    All the best

    • 4 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you ^_^
      I think I saw someone here has done this, but I wanted the”i” sound to be the same in the three lines.