Comments : napowrimo: a forlorn love story (day five)

  • 4 years ago

    by Star

    So you are using up the prompts :)

    "we’ll never know if it
    was the destination or if the words
    never burned hot enough."
    ^
    waaah this part is powerful!!!!

  • 4 years ago

    by Sunshine

    yes that's exactly how it should be done. amazing entry!

  • 4 years ago

    by Vanesa

    Such a powerful write. Thanks for sharing

  • 4 years ago

    by M. Rene'

    The words are always hot enough. I love the simplicity of this piece, thank you for sharing.