by Ben Pickard
If this is literal, it must be hard to swallow, as it were. There is little worse than feeling you are not loved quite as much as you should be. |
The metaphor of you being the end pieces, wow, that hit hard. In my family, those end bread pieces are sometimes thrown away, and I have to remind my family members to save them from me, that they are still good, that it is a waste to discard of perfectly good bread. |
Thank you so much. This definitely came from a place of great pain. I’m glad it resonated with you |
by Ink
I like this poem a lot, very heartfelt, I like how much you convey with brevity. very relatable. regards Ink |